Can anyone add to my essay and fix it ?

Can anyone add to my essay and fix it ?

Essay about – The common life by russel sanders

http://www.jstor.org/stable/41400590?loggedin=true.

Instructions on file & document as well

My teacher told me I’d begin where he begins his argument, by stating that americans are more individualistic than communitarian then move onto individualistic communism. (in the second paragrapgh. She told me to break the second paragrapgh it down and support it with textual evidence. Then provide my opinion on the matter in the third or 4th paragraph.

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