Revise my essay

DO

  1. The FINAL must be at least four full pages.
  2. Make SOME revisions to ESSAY.
  3. DO restructure ONE paragraph as a perfect paragraph. Label it.
  4. INCLUDE the MEMO with
    • A context paragraph. Write a brief report about where you are with your draft, such as what you’ve done so far, what you haven’t done yet, what you are happy with, and what you are unhappy with, etc.
    • A series of questions. Offer requests for specific kinds of feedback, such as: Are my paragraphs too long? Am I describing too much? Do I offer enough analysis to balance my evidence? Do I have an argument, or a report?
    • Unity check paragraph
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