I have received the response from my professor. I will post it and hope you can follow it to edit the first draft. Final draft need 8-10 pages
For the final draft, think about the connection between different sources. We’re trying to “map out” different sources in order to answer the research question – not arguing for your stance on an issue. How does information from Vaughn relate to Kant? How does Tooley fit in to the relationship between Vaughn and Kant? The focus right now is heavily on “providing evidence for my stance on this issue” – and I’m trying to shift it to English 102’s goals of research and relating between sources.