Has to be the book Divergent and the movie The Outsiders because they have different endings.
Add some specific comparisons to Divergent or The Outsiders.
The conclusion need to be more specific and connect to Divergent and The Outsiders.
You can add examples to the essay.
Combine some of the sentences into one sentence since my professor wants us to write like a native speaker.
Correct the grammar mistakes, especially the red words.
Do not use any transition words. Use only coordinating conjunction and subordinating conjunction.
Try to change some sentences into noun appositives and verbal phrases.