“enemy aliens”, English homework help

This is the professor notes on the assignment that you did for me. Just fixed what she asked me please.

Her notes: this essay has a lot of potential, but you need to work on it more.After reading your essay it seems to me that you are arguing that after the family was deemed “enemy aliens” they started to get rid of their identities as Japanese Americans because Japanese were being persecuted and they were told they weren’t true American – which left them somewhere in between without identities at all. It is a good argument, but you need to go through your essay and make sure you structure your topic sentences and evidence to support that argument.

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