Editing and Revising, English homework help


I want to ask if you provide editing and revising papers because I am graduate student and I was in the list of graduating students. Suddenly, my professor told me that I fail this semester because of my research. I talked to her many many times and she gave me anothet chance. I need help with it in editi it. Could you please help me and see her comments and fix it for me? 
My research contained three chapters ( introduction, literature review, and methodology). I completed it and the title of the research is , Saudi Arabian Students’ English Speaking Proficiency Difficulties. She put some suggestions and she told me in her email that I am near to fail. 
Could you help me in that please.

Thank You.

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