Birth of a Nation- Movie Analysis/ Research Paper, history homework help

Attached is the paper that I wrote. Its about the movie “Birth of a nation” . I will also paste the remarks of my professor below of what he expects on this paper. Please use the paper as a foundation and re-do the paper with the corrections and add more information. The paper requires full length, two-three pages or more. Please follow the rubric does not need to be in the order of the rubric but has to have the information the rubric is requesting

Professor remarks:

Do not use contractions

Where you talk about production start a new paragraph

For the literate paragraph need an intro sentence

Comma between family and Elizabeth

He would preach

Does the movie explain why Samuel let him preach elsewhere?

Start a new paragraph even discussing the murders/killings

In the 1800s paragraph before the killing paragraph- makes more sense.

Overall very good- looking forward to your presentation.

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