ARTH270 Bellevue College First Generation Feminism Art Essay
feedback:
I can see you had thoughtful ideas within this paper. Your intro had me a little bit lost as this paper’s primary focus is meant to be on first generation feminist art, not political feminism. I also am not sure the two paragraphs after that are necessary for your argument. I thought you summarized Schneemann’s work nicely and would like to see that be done with Bengalis work, as it feels like you glazed over her. You’re also missing your discussion on essentialism and a concluding paragraph. Try to hit the minimum requirement of 3 pages. Working on these points will really help strengthen your essay
