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Here is her feedback: You’ve chosen an interesting focus here–exploring the implications of treating addiction as moral choice (not exploring other aspects). That analysis is covered in most of the body paragraphs. Do be sure, though, that all body paragraphs reflect that focus. For example, the second to last paragraph is more about the other factors (social aspects, spiritual aspects, etc.). Also, consider revising the thesis statement, so it better reflects the specific effects of addressing addiction as only a moral choice. It should be just like the sample only using the same information that you did on the unit 6 project I attached. Just has to be revised. Thanks buddy

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