abstract fix on abortion research paper

attached is the failed assignment #4 abstract for my research paper with my prof remarks on it. Please fix!!!! Attached is also “whats done so far which include topic, thesis statement, hypothesis and literature review, this is only for informational purposes for you since this class is all about this one research paper that is put together in different parts. Do not change anything in there or make any changes to the resources, just focus on the abstract.

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